I really like the way you write, especially the last paragraphs of introducing yourself as "a Global Studies Major," a really interesting and fun way to say global citizenship. Your writing style also inspires me a lot since it is free and has no structure. You also list the possibilities of being other national citizens and why you didn't choose them, and finally you choose to become a global citizen. Your description of a typical Idahoan family shows me a really vivid picture, and I can clearly see you don’t choose Idahoan as your identity because you don’t have a sense of belonging. However, maybe you can extend more on why don’t choose as an American, and where your thoughts come from. Also, I am interested to hear more about you as a global citizen and how you connect to the world, and how it affects you. Overall, thank you for this fun response!